Writing Tip #1

Rick Santorum

“I shook the hand of the American dream and it has a strong grip.” – Rick Santorum

Don’t do that. It’s metaphorical gibberish and vaguely creepy. 

For maximum clarity and creepiness try something a little more direct like this :

“I shook the hand of Orlac and it was cold and stiff”

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